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On dresses and unspoken rules

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Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 | 08:40 pm
Location: a sauna in sahara

Pairing: Onho (Onew/Minjung)
Rating: NC-17


He slips two fingers inside her wet folds, pumping them in and out in a steadily increasing pace, urged on by her moans. He’s never seen her like this (obviously); black hair spread like a halo on the unfamiliar pillow (who’s room is this anyway?), her big eyes closed and her lips parted. Her dress is bunched up around her waist, pulled up and pushed down to expose her completely. Her bra is still on though, but it does little to cover up her breasts, her nipples hard from being exposed to the cool air in the room.

It’s hypnotizing, the way her head lolls from side to side; her teeth dragging over her bottom lip as she moans and clenches around his fingers. Her long legs are bent at the knee, directing his attention to what lies between them. She’s wet, her juices glistening on his fingers every time he pulls them out from within her.

“Oppa, I’m gonna—Oh god, I’m gonna—“ She never finishes her sentence and he speeds up the pace.

He’s used to seeing her on the field, running back and forth with a soccer ball, wearing a pair of shorts and a loose t-shirt that stops mid thigh, not a skin tight dress that shows off all the curves he never knew she had (to be perfectly honest he’s never thought of her as a girl, just one of the guys – except she’s most definitively not a guy).

She’s not moaning anymore – she’s screaming (thank god the party downstairs is loud enough to drown it out). There is a thin film of perspiration covering her body (he realizes the back of his shirt is soaked with sweat as well) and there are strands of hair sticking to her temples and forehead. She comes with a high pitched “yes” and soaks the sheets (he hopes it’ll dry before the bed is going to be used for sleeping). He’s about to pull his hand away when her fingers circle his wrist and begs him not stop (right, multiple orgasms - he forgot girls can do that).

The last time he saw her in a dress was back in elementary school, when he was a sixth grader and she was in fourth. Her mother had forced her into a pale yellow summer dress with spaghetti straps and a floral print and she spent the whole day tugging and pulling at it with a frown on her face. There is an unspoken rule about not going after your best friends little sister (and he hopes Minseok will forgive him – if he ever finds out that is) but when said little sister shows up at a party more than half-drunk and wearing a dress for the first time in almost a decade (at least it’s been a decade since he saw her in a dress) that barely covers her ass rules don’t matter.

The second time Minjung comes she squirts all over his hand and wrists. Her legs press together and trap his hand in between them aftershocks course through her body. Her walls clench and unclench a few times around his fingers before her legs fall open, her whole body spent. She’s unable to move a finger, her (almost naked) chest rising and falling as she struggles to steady her breath. He hesitates for a moment because he doesn’t know what to do, but in the end he picks up her panties from the floor (pink, and they match her lace bra – he didn’t even know she knew how to spell the word bra) and slides them up her legs (shaven and smooth, he’d never paid attention to that detail either). He accidentally brushes against her wet core when he pulls them up over her butt and she whimpers quietly, too sensitive. He tugs the bottom of the dress back down and fixes the straps of her bra before pulling the tight fabric over her breasts, marveling at how soft they feel as his fingers brush against them.

Once he’s done he’s only left with the problem of what to do next. She’s fast and she’s strong and she doesn’t hesitate to swing a fist when someone crosses a line but he’s sure none of that will help when she’s fast asleep (or did she just pass out, he doesn’t know). He can’t just leave her but the blood leaving his dick is starting to reach his brain and he’s in so much trouble if her brother catches them together (the whole room reeks of sex and the sheets are still wet and he needs to wash his hands. he briefly wonders if that stain on his right thigh is from her).

He opts for a text message and takes his phone out, lying about finding her passed out before he hurries out the room and hides behind a large plant (he wants to make sure no one but her brother will find her). It takes Minseok less than eight minutes to come running up the stairs; he finds the right bedroom in two tries and carries her to his car over his shoulder and throws her into the back seat. She stirs slightly but doesn’t wake up and her brother has to buckle her in before he sits down in front of the wheel and backs out of the drive way (he knows because he sees it all from the bedroom window). 

Onew prays her brother won't find out.

A/N: Wrote this because Minjung is a squirter.

Why are there no fics about this?? This fandom is obsessed with porn but I've never read a fic where someone, anyone, squirts. And I should have focused more on bodily fluids and not everything else. I'll give it another try in the future.

I take no responsibility for this, I have a soar throat and a high fever. 




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hyo

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from: squickz
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 06:17 pm (UTC)
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Pretty awesome writing considering you have a high fever.
And I've missed your writing, ngl. This was hot, and the writing has to be good to get me into het! fics.
Plus I love how the beginning is just BOOM in your face with the word 'folds'. I had to stop and recollect myself.
Also, brava for writing a smut fic that came off very, very hot without needing to use any dialogue or dirty talk. Not an easy feat.

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 08:57 pm (UTC)
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the beginning was pretty "BOOM" i guess, i was going to do something about it but then i just let it be (or it would still be on my computer unfinished)

i've missed writing. unlike SOME ppl (not naming any names) i'm not good enough at writing and posting fics about cigarettes and sounding like every second day

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hyo

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from: squickz
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 09:24 pm (UTC)
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why would you do something about it? i like BOOM intros.

and yes, i was very much enjoying that bizarre spike of inspiration. sucks that i'm dry now. :[

here's hoping my lost inspiration will find you so you can give me more preggers!minho.

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 09:43 pm (UTC)
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oh god the mpreg. don't remind me

i can't, even with all the inspiration in the world i can't come up with an ending. i hate the thing so much, it's terrible

why did i write it??

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kinkibum

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from: kinkibum
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 09:03 pm (UTC)
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Not usually one for het fics (and that makes squirting pretty unusual for me too), but this is great! The way Onew takes care of her and dresses her and then hides behind a plant... jesus it is just how I would imagine him.

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Sun, Jul. 8th 2012 09:23 pm (UTC)
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thank you!

onew is too much of a gentleman to just leave her alone :D of course it had to be something weird tho, like a plant of all things xD

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Ray

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from: its_rayning
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 12:27 am (UTC)
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There is an unspoken rule about not going after your best friends little sister (and he hopes Minseok will forgive him – if he ever finds out that is) but when said little sister shows up at a party more than half-drunk and wearing a dress for the first time in almost a decade (at least it’s been a decade since he saw her in a dress) that barely covers her ass rules don’t matter.

I perked up when I read 'MInseok' tbqh /dies. I don't usually read het but I really loved the way this panned out.

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:17 pm (UTC)
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gotta make use of the fact that minho has an older brother ;)

i'm glad you liked it even tho it was het

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kiyabaybee

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from: kiyabaybee
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 02:18 am (UTC)
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Onew, that's so nice of you to make sure she gets home alright & smart too cause you don't get in trouble with Minseok
This is good for someone who has a fever
There's quite a few Fics with squirting Gwiboon actually...

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:15 pm (UTC)
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squirting gwiboon explains why i haven't come across a squirting fic. but thanks for mentioning it, i'll give them a try

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magnumb.

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from: hiddenmeghanis
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 02:27 am (UTC)
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i enjoyed it.
i love your authors note xD
also, i agree with squickz, good job on the hot without the dirty talk. dirty talk is my favorite thing to write, so i'm always jealous when someone can write hot sex without it ;-;
good for you :D
and thank you for sharing!

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:11 pm (UTC)
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thank you for reading ^^

i'm glad ppl find this hot bcz i was aiming for something hotter and dirtier and i feel it's kind of mild - the word dick is like only mentioned once (new personal record)

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sweatnitemare

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from: sweatnitemare
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 03:07 am (UTC)
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Awww Jinki! What a gentleman you are? If Minseok's find out you'll be fine. Who doesn't want you as their brother-in-law huh, you sweet little thing.

Minjung passed out! Really now? At least a thank you kiss. Effing squirting twice on Jinki's fingers. Hahahaha. Minjung's hot by the way. Her long legs are murderous.

Thank you for this. Smut in the morning is just my kind of breakfast. ^^

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:07 pm (UTC)
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Thank you for this. Smut in the morning is just my kind of breakfast. ^^

love that line

i want minjung's long legs, they'd look hot in hot pants or a mini-skirt

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the stars will sing of us

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from: xdenisex
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:50 am (UTC)
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mmmf
i definitely enjoyed this
and the fact that you didnt even use dirty talk but it was still hot i jsfdlnrwekngdgfd

also im positive that g_odalisque13 writes squirting!gwiboon dsklangkrnhtgc

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 05:28 pm (UTC)
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i'm glad you enjoyed it

and thanks for the tip, now i know where to find some squirting fics :P

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dubusangtae14

squirter Minjung is good stuff

from: dubusangtae14
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 09:27 am (UTC)
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I woke up at an ungodly hour and saw this~ omg, I am so turned on by this little oneshot!!!! =)))) But i was wondering why the evil works in progress was stil on top...maybe I overlooked this one when I visited yoyr journal earlier...This is hot, by the way! Even if it's just fingering...it's totally a turn on~ I've been deprived of Minjung/Onew nc17 fics lately and this is like a breath of fresh air :D

Get well soon!^^ Thanks for this wknderful read!

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minho's flower

Re: squirter Minjung is good stuff

from: minhosflower
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 04:57 pm (UTC)
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the evil works in progress will forever be on top - check the post date, and no you didn't overlook, it's fresh out of my Microsoft word (can i put it like that?)

i wanna write more minjung/onew. it's a cute couple!!!

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poyiano

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from: poyiano
date: Mon, Jul. 9th 2012 07:18 pm (UTC)
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Ahhh!~ I'm so happy you updated! I really missed your writing. This was sooo good omg. You're right, there needs to be more squirting fics. You did such a good job with this kink, if that's what you want to call it. Also, I love you feel better! :c

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Tue, Jul. 17th 2012 01:18 pm (UTC)
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I'm glad you liked it :) Feeling so much better, thank you. Three weeks of antibiotics >_

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kailisweet

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from: kailisweet
date: Sun, Jul. 15th 2012 10:39 pm (UTC)
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YES! Onew gets more than chicken this time, even though he didn't even get off.

Hiding behind a plant, nice. Totally Onew :)

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minho's flower

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from: minhosflower
date: Tue, Jul. 17th 2012 01:14 pm (UTC)
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He almost got a hot chick instead of chicken, except she passed out.
He probably got off at home tho.

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